Night Mistress

i have a feeling that i will screw up the story even more. I only want this to be a short story but it looks like i have to turn ...

it's interesting.

Sound like an interesting story.

You need to space it out a bit. that's the only problem i see.

you should realy continue this story. i happen to enjoy it. it like i'm reading one of my books.

he didn't love her the way she love him?

that was ....interesting. you will have to up a another piece in the near future.

I know. That's why i'm going to redo this thing again, but it's going to be longer.

I'm never going to learn how about be a good writer. I always repeat my mistakes. Meevs: I have read it thought and it sounds fine by me. i even ...

That was creepy. did that happen for real?

That's so sad.

That was sad.

really good. put up another piece soon.

it really good. you shoudl put up another piece here soon.

Interesting.